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Friday, 17 May 2013

Dabir the Donkey


Walt:write the author's purpose.

The characters in the story,Dabir,the crocodile,camels,bees,and the master. This story took place in desert. Dabir the donkey loved to play, he also clumsy. Dabir the donkey was very noisy and always disturbed the other animals.

The problem was when Dabir went kicking his back legs around and accidentally a small rock hitted the beehive. The bee’s went chasing Dabir around the pyramid but he knew they weren’t  coming after running around the pyramid ten times. Dabir rested under a date palm and saw a herd of camels and headed over there. Dabir kicked sand into the camels face they got very annoyed. The camels chased Dabir around the pyramid, but Dabir knew that the camels weren’t chasing after running around the pyramid 7 times. Dabir went over a river and saw a group of crocodiles in the lake having a rest. The large crocodile got fed up with Dabir and tried to eat him so he run around the pyramid. Dabir knew that the crocodile wasn't chasing him when he was running around the pyramid five times. The master was chasing Dabir around the pyramid too.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice story Trey I like it you really paid attention to the story

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