WALT: write a creative story in paragraphs.
My Island of Paradise
If I had an Island, I’ll have exactly 900,000 People. Every house on the street was a bach and you also had an beach house. When you wake up in the morning, you’ll hear birds humming and singing in the trees telling you to wake up. There will be an open beach as the water is sparkling clean.
In my Island there will be no murdering, stealing because the police is beyond high trained ninjas and the doctors and nurses a high trained surgeons. On my island there will be securities standing outside of the shops and banks. The jobs on the island is really good and you get paid quite a lot a week. The minimum wage on the $2500.
Every second Saturday there will be lots of famous stars coming over to the island. Like the professional skaters, Tony Hawk, Rodney Mullen, Bam Margera. Even famous sports stars like, Daniel Carter, Tiger Woods, Roger Federer, Lebron James, Kobe bryant. There will also be a food festival from different countries selling food.
When I grow up I would like to have this
Island but only if dreams were real.
1 comments:
Well done Trey you have written a really interesting story. You are really creative and I hope some of your wishes come true. Trey, you know dreams are real if you work hard for it like if you study hard and get a good job what do you think.
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