No Guy Fawkes

WALT: 1. Write a narrative, 2. use words to paint a picture, 3. use senses.

No Guy Fawkes

Kyle was very excited to come back home after school. Mum and and dad had all the fireworks displayed on the lounge table. Kyle and his little sister Jamie couldn’t wait for tonight.

Dad was going to get some more fireworks. So Dad went off to the shop. Daniel, Kyle’s best friend came over. He was staying the night over at Kyle’s house.  Daniel and Kyle went to back yard to look after Jamie, just in case she might hurt herself. Dad had finally arrived home.

It was getting dark. Everybody from the neighbourhood started gathering their fireworks just to get ready for tonight. Once it was 8:00, everybody started to light up their fireworks.  There was a lot of excitement on the street. BOOM! BANG! Kyle heard as face started turning bright red.

Half an hour later, he felt something wet. Daniel looked at the sky and saw it turning grey. They didn't know what was going to happen. It started to get cold and all of a sudden, it started pouring with rain. Everybody gathered their fireworks and evacuated inside.

Kyle looked sad, so did Daniel and Jessie. They didn't know what to do with the leftover fireworks. Everybody put on their thinking caps and was thinking of ideas. Jessie came up with brilliant idea. She told dad and mum to save the fireworks for Christmas. Nobody had thought of that. So mum and dad put in their wardrobe for Christmas.

While it was still raining, Kyle and Daniel were sitting on the couch looking outside the window. They just hope, they would save their Guy Fawkes Christmas.

Theme: If it does rain on Guy Fawkes save it for a special days instead of putting it to waste.